Number 4 For Junior Theme
Eating Disorders and Athletes

I have found a lot of information lately from sources online and from many good books that i have gotten from the library, but i dont know where to put all of this information in my paper. I tried to come up with a start to my paper over the weekend, but it didnt work for me. My thesis is not fully put together and i need help on trying to put everything i want in the statement and that is one of my problems. I have ideas on the main ideas i want to say in each body paragraph, but i have no idea how i want to start them. Im feeling a bit lost is what i guess im trying to say. I have some good information, i just dont know how to get put it into my essay?

Here is my start to my thesis and what i want to say in my essay...

Eating disorders are prominent in the sport of gymnastics because...
1. pressure from coaches
2. stress of competition
3. gymnastics has grown in the media/society
4. judges and the skimpy clothing
5. elite gymnasts

These are the main ideas that i want to talk about in my essay, i just dont know how to make it into a thesis or part of my introductions because i dont just want to list them out.

Anyone have any suggestions for me?